Wednesday, January 25, 2012

The Enemy Of The State


This is a tale of no battle of swords,
But of a state in the world of the lords
Where every man from young to old,
Owned a hen that laid two eggs of gold
They sold them away to the neighbouring states
In exchange for food at cheaper rates

In this very state lived an immoral man
Who in his mind had a devious plan
Of coating his white eggs with golden dust
And selling them away, knowing it wasn’t just

The man made merry for the weeks whole two
But soon the king knew his intentions true
He called upon the immoral man
And pronounced him prison for an unending span

Then the immoral man made an offer wise
That caught the king with glittery eyes
He offered to make him a daily trade
Of one golden egg, if he let him evade

The king got lured to his devilish plot
And let him escape, giving no second thought
Soon this con was hidden from none
And every other man now felt undone

Thence the whole town did the same
 Which later turned out to be a cause for shame
The world came to know of their con at last,
The state once honoured, was now an outcast

Soon there was no food left in the state,
Their greed forged poverty to their fate
Every face in the state was now a wreck
As there was no cure for hunger in a golden egg

The filth brought upon by a single man,
Led to the downfall of the entire clan
The lust for wealth is the deadliest might
Which turned out to be the reason for their plight

This was a tale of no battle of swords
But of a state in the world of the lords
Where the men forgot what morals meant
And in the end were left to repent.

PS:- Looking for a topic to write on, i bumped into corruption. And I thought that instead of writing directly on it, why not create a story as well. So just in case this doesn't make sense, Think of corruption :-p




































3 comments:

  1. Brilliantly portrayed. . .
    Very subtle yet sending out a huge message
    A story well told doing justice to the rhyme of the poem and bringing out the flavor of the corruption that resides in each and every one of us not just our politicians
    In the first read the reader is just engrossed in the tale but then slowly realization dawns upon the true nature of the work. . .
    Very well written

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  2. Thanks a pile man.. Its friends like you who make me feel happy about my efforts :-))

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  3. Goldfinger, the poem was easier to understand than your comment. :D

    Poem- Bahot Badhiya. A good story inside a good poem. Inception. :)

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